life is an examination.

  • God is the greatest examiner, we all are the students.                                                    Life is the answersheet, on which we have to give exam.                                         The time allowed is three hours; The first one is chidhod, The second is youth ,The third is old age.                          When the bell of last hour ring ,the examination is over ,the copy is snatched, the paper is long.                         The time is short if we long for something it we take us to hell,the new life once more begin.                                                        If we pass,we go to heaven and return no more..

Friends it is my first attempt of writing poem . If you like it please comment on the comment section below and tell me the ways by which i can improve myself.


#Snigdha:D:D

8 Comments

  1. Mr.Lonely says:

    It was a great parallelism/corollary…😊😊
    Atleast you tried writing a poem…
    I can’t gather that much courage to compose one…😂

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  2. Mr.Lonely says:

    It was a great corollary/parallelism between life and exam👍☺
    Atleast you gathered courage to write one…i can’t even compose one..😂😂

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    1. Thanks so much😃

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      1. Mr.Lonely says:

        Ur Welcome

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  3. I liked the way you shaped the poem
    laced with truth it is a nice poem, certainly very nice for the first attempt. keep writing mam😊😊

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    1. Thank you soo much sir 😊😊

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  4. That was nice for the first attempt. 🙂 Well compared.. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much!😊

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